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    Songart for Ragnarok 30 Minutes

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    Kentai-P
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    Songart for Ragnarok 30 Minutes

    Post  Kentai-P on Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:07 am

    Hi there,

    I'd also like to show you folks the songart I made for "Ragnarok 30 Minutes".

    it is one of my very favourite songs of mine :3

    here the art:

    click to view the image

    also here is the song:


    hope you like it.

    sy,
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    Re: Songart for Ragnarok 30 Minutes

    Post  Paprika on Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:15 pm

    Would you like a critique of the art?

    And I listened to the song... So I can talk about that too Very Happy
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    Re: Songart for Ragnarok 30 Minutes

    Post  Kentai-P on Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:47 pm

    say what you want about the song, but nothing about the art! (it has lot of mistakes and pointing out the mistakes will make me feel bad. so baddd....)

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    Re: Songart for Ragnarok 30 Minutes

    Post  Paprika on Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:16 pm

    Ah. I wanted to suggest colouring and placement.

    The art style... I won't touch on.

    Because you shouldn't generally have more than 3 main colours in a simple picture such as that.

    You have Pink and Purple as main accents, but the text looks super tacky against the red background.

    Go for a plain black, or white background. Any shade of grey, and let the text be a high contrasting colour with it.

    Or use a complementary colour such as blue or a light red.

    And another suggestion is to stay away from bright, vivid hues in your pictures, as you are supposed to watch the video for a while. Bright colours cause eyestrain and are unpleasant to look at for longer periods of time, so you can brighten the hair and lower the saturation so it's more of a pale pink...

    Or darken it and reduce saturation to make it a stronger colour instead of a bright one.

    Vivid colours should only be used as accents instead of in the main focus.
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    Re: Songart for Ragnarok 30 Minutes

    Post  Kentai-P on Mon Jul 19, 2010 5:28 pm

    phew, well thats ok, thanks for the cri... wait a second! you didn't say anything about the song at all!


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