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    Drink? [UTAU original, need BGM]

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    Drink? [UTAU original, need BGM]

    Post  crossfrown on Fri Jul 16, 2010 1:59 am

    So I wrote a song about getting drugged on a date, confessed too, and somekind of badtouch occurring(date rape without rape being explicatively present).
    The song was originally about being distant, but then I wrote the chorus and I found the new subject much more interesting.


    I'm only a songwriter, and I know absolutely nothing about harmonies and all that jazz, so I was wondering if anyone was interested in doing the BGM.

    LYRICS (I'll record myself singing it tomorrow or so.)-
    Spoiler:
    Aa
    It's spinning

    Ne
    I can't breathe

    Mou
    What was it that you said
    That you said

    Hey
    I'm just fine

    No
    It's alright

    Really
    I'm not scared I'm not crying
    I'm not crying

    Woe
    It's not

    Slow
    Tears will

    Flow
    I promise

    what was it
    That you said
    That you said
    No

    What you said

    My mind is blank
    I can't move

    Painful
    It's too hot
    Nausea
    I feel cold

    "Love you"
    I don't so
    Don't touch me
    Don't touch me

    "Hate you"
    It's true so
    I'm sorry
    I'm sorry

    Aa

    I hate

    No

    I hate all

    Stop

    Everyone is

    Just

    I hate everyone

    I hate everyone

    I don't need love

    I just wanted love

    I don't need to touch

    I just want to touch

    I hate it

    I hate it

    I hate it

    I hate it

    I hate

    I hate

    I hate

    I

    I

    I


    Despite the lyrics and the content, it's supposed to be a sad song.

    The latter half is based off of the singer, 911, who is a misanthropist.
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    Re: Drink? [UTAU original, need BGM]

    Post  UtauReni on Fri Jul 16, 2010 9:38 am

    How dark... I LOVE IT. ./shot

    What sort of genre do you imagine this song being in? Like... where instruments are concerned...? i.e. do you imagine guitars or pianos or synthesized sounds playing in the background? Just to get an idea as to what it could sound like x3
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    Re: Drink? [UTAU original, need BGM]

    Post  Koda on Fri Jul 16, 2010 1:26 pm

    I'd totally go for it, but I've had bad experience with trying to write for free-verse poetry more than once. Let me know if you write one in meter and rhyme. I'll totally be all over that! ^^

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    Re: Drink? [UTAU original, need BGM]

    Post  crossfrown on Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:03 am

    It's supposed to have a simple piano background, I suppose. Something very simple. Maybe with some mellow pads in the chorus.

    It's simple enough for even me to do, but like I said, I don't know anything about harmonies. :c

    @Koda
    Yeah you see the very fact I have no idea what you just said proves I seriously don't belong at all.

    I've got a more in-beat, rhyming song, but it turns psychotic and random at the end. idk I just like crazy people. It's not a very good thing for music writing I realize.
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    Re: Drink? [UTAU original, need BGM]

    Post  AgentJ on Sat Jul 17, 2010 2:24 am

    Will give a try, i dont promise anything good since i am still a noob composer. Laughing

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    Re: Drink? [UTAU original, need BGM]

    Post  crossfrown on Sat Jul 17, 2010 2:29 am

    yay *w*

    My current mic is broke, so I'll record the song tomorrow when I buy a new one.

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