Original song subject help

PLEASE DON'T GIVE THIS VIDEO OUT TO NON-FORUM MEMBERS.

I have like everything I want for it decided... except the subject. >_<;



If anyone could help me with the subject that would be greatly appreciated.

The vocals will most likely be done by Mahou Yuki and Megurine Luka.

Subjects I DO NOT want:
- Romance
- 18+/ecchi
- Anything related to gore
- Hateful

Feel free to also give feedback on what I have for the so far. I will not, however, do major changes like melody and backing music. I might add harmonies or change instruments, but that's about it.

Thanks in advance!

First of all, it's pretty nice, though I hope that won't be the final volume of the BGM. It's VERY quiet on my end; I had to crank up the speakers to even hear the melody placeholder.

Second of all, you're right; it is pretty hard to place the theme. You kind of killed off every major idea in the first post (besides maybe insanity, which I'll admit is overused).

Did you consider loss? Or maybe peace? Those are both still valid song ideas, and I don't hear them as often.

Koda wrote:First of all, it's pretty nice, though I hope that won't be the final volume of the BGM. It's VERY quiet on my end; I had to crank up the speakers to even hear the melody placeholder.

Second of all, you're right; it is pretty hard to place the theme. You kind of killed off every major idea in the first post (besides maybe insanity, which I'll admit is overused).

Did you consider loss? Or maybe peace? Those are both still valid song ideas, and I don't hear them as often.

Yes, the volume will be changed. I didn't really bother to make the song any louder yet because it's still a work in progress (since I might change instruments) and I kind of want to prevent people from abusing this fragment. (YouTube2MP3, anyone?)

Well, thing is... I don't like to stick to the themes everyone makes songs about. This song isn't really fit for sillyness, so don't expect any Creepy Toast things... xD;

My personal idea (which I put into spoilers so people won't automatically assume it):

Spoiler:

I kind of want more suggestions, though.

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