Songart for Ragnarok 30 Minutes

Hi there,

I'd also like to show you folks the songart I made for "Ragnarok 30 Minutes".

it is one of my very favourite songs of mine :3

here the art:

click to view the image

also here is the song:


hope you like it.

sy,
Kentai

Would you like a critique of the art?

And I listened to the song... So I can talk about that too

say what you want about the song, but nothing about the art! (it has lot of mistakes and pointing out the mistakes will make me feel bad. so baddd....)

sy,
Kentai

Ah. I wanted to suggest colouring and placement.

The art style... I won't touch on.

Because you shouldn't generally have more than 3 main colours in a simple picture such as that.

You have Pink and Purple as main accents, but the text looks super tacky against the red background.

Go for a plain black, or white background. Any shade of grey, and let the text be a high contrasting colour with it.

Or use a complementary colour such as blue or a light red.

And another suggestion is to stay away from bright, vivid hues in your pictures, as you are supposed to watch the video for a while. Bright colours cause eyestrain and are unpleasant to look at for longer periods of time, so you can brighten the hair and lower the saturation so it's more of a pale pink...

Or darken it and reduce saturation to make it a stronger colour instead of a bright one.

Vivid colours should only be used as accents instead of in the main focus.

phew, well thats ok, thanks for the cri... wait a second! you didn't say anything about the song at all!